Author Topic: how do i put it?  (Read 2059 times)

verybigmouth

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how do i put it?
« on: June 11, 2007, 04:14:05 AM »
i'm doing a scene where a group of men entered a boardroom and sat at their places. there were knifes on the table. one at every man's place. what is the right way to describe it? plz help.

and another scene. a man touch the nozzle of his gun on a man's forehead. whats the word for it?

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Re: how do i put it?
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2007, 08:50:03 AM »
Hi,

I have NO idea what you're asking for here. Knives on a table (with a 'v') are knives on a table. What are you looking for? You could describe the knives but otherwise it's simply a question of a knife at each place setting. Could you clarify a little?

Same for the next question. My first instinct was to say either suicide, attempted murder or ADW! Are you looking for an expression?
Again - a little clarification would be good.

Or perhaps I've just completely missed the point and someone else can help you. I'll check back later!

Symphony

verybigmouth

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Re: how do i put it?
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2007, 08:54:59 AM »
you've just answered my first question. (a knife at each place setting).

for the other one. A man aimed his gun on another man. But the nozzle of the gun is exactly at the victim's forehead. The gun is touching the victim's forehead. get it?

SuzieHarris

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Re: how do i put it?
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2007, 09:42:06 AM »
point blank range?

Jink

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Re: how do i put it?
« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2007, 10:40:06 AM »
how bout these:

Hank pressed the gun to Willie's sweat-slicked forehead.

She kissed her 9mm up between his eyes and let it rest there till he decided.

So I poked Shorty in the forehead with my gun.

Jink

verybigmouth

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Re: how do i put it?
« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2007, 05:46:37 AM »
thanks. never thought that.