Author Topic: Looking for feedback on the first chapter of my fantasy book.  (Read 61 times)

Offline Elena Cenric

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I'm looking for some honest feedback on this first chapter of my story. I'd love to know if the characters are developing well/are they relatable; I'd also like to know if the story line and setting are clear. I attached the file below.