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Elena Cenric
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Looking for feedback on the first chapter of my fantasy book.
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May 05, 2022, 03:06:43 PM »
I'm looking for some honest feedback on this first chapter of my story. I'd love to know if the characters are developing well/are they relatable; I'd also like to know if the story line and setting are clear. I attached the file below.
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