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Offline Heartsongsdiary

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In their Midst
« on: January 02, 2022, 12:07:49 AM »
Life, humanity, God
all have been blamed
for:
human weakness,
human failure
human mistakes
and everything bad
that happens in life.

Life created humanity
and gave man the ability
to distinguish right
from wrong...

As man progressed
in making life easy
the ability to know
right from wrong
was lost and replaced
by individual philosophy.

Lost, humans stumble
fall and blame God
for not making himself
known, blinded to the
brilliance of the light
in their midst.
11:43pm  January 1, 2022
Be who you are...not everyone will like you but those that matter will. jt

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Re: In their Midst
« Reply #1 on: January 02, 2022, 08:07:33 AM »
I like the last stanza very much. 

Some punctuation missing,  for example after Stumble, but in other pages as well. 

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Re: In their Midst
« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2022, 08:07:55 AM »
Places*

Offline Heartsongsdiary

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Re: In their Midst
« Reply #3 on: January 02, 2022, 12:29:09 PM »
I like the last stanza very much. 

Some punctuation missing,  for example after Stumble, but in other *places as well.

Thank you. I 'm a heartwriter. . As such my heart sometimes over rides the rules for writing.

Jan Tetstone
Be who you are...not everyone will like you but those that matter will. jt