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Offline lukemfoster

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(unfinished pilot) My Comedy Drama about a sex worker 14pgs
« on: December 22, 2021, 04:55:21 PM »
Hi all, I would be ever so grateful for people who review my pilot. It is not complete but it contains the most important parts, I just need some fillers to make it to approx 30 mins long.

The show would be used to who a realistic take on online sex workers and also to show the ignorance of some men in terms of sex and how to treat women.

I will literally be reviewing other peoples scripts whilst I have this posted up.

Be honest, I would love any criticism at all.

Thank you in advance .

The script is attached
« Last Edit: December 22, 2021, 08:27:28 PM by lukemfoster »