Author Topic: Everyday life.  (Read 154 times)

Offline Canbttry2

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Everyday life.
« on: November 30, 2021, 03:08:19 PM »
                   My Choices.

I always have a choice.
Left, right, loose tight,
Down , up,day or night.
I'll always have a choice.
Good,bad,happy or sad,
I'll always get the choice.
I get to choose,I always do.
And then with my voice,I'll make my choice,
And my choice is always you.

I'm BRAND NEW.please be kind and help  in ANYWAY.

Offline Heartsongsdiary

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Re: Everyday life.
« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2021, 07:26:13 PM »
                   My Choices.

I always have a choice.
Left, right, loose tight,
Down , up,day or night.
I'll always have a choice.
Good,bad,happy or sad,
I'll always get the choice.
I get to choose,I always do.
And then with my voice,I'll make my choice,
And my choice is always you.

I'm BRAND NEW.please be kind and help  in ANYWAY.
I have never seen a poem's title  ended with a period.
And. I am still trying to figure out the title. Which is it?  Everyday Life or My Choices
All in all I enjoyed the read. jt

I always have a choice.
Left, right, loose tight,
Down , up,day or night.

I'll always have a choice.
Good,bad,happy or sad,
I'll always get the choice.

I get to choose,I always do.

And then with my voice,
I'll make my choice,
And my choice is always you.
Be who you are...not everyone will like you but those that matter will. jt

Offline Canbttry2

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Re: Everyday life.
« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2021, 05:31:36 PM »
Thank you so much for your reply.Ill be honest,I am very inexperienced with this and recently I've been enjoying writing poetry (very amatur ) and I came on this site because I wanted people to be very straight forward if I was useless.even a beginner.so what you wrote back and advice you kindly gave meant a lot.i will try to understand the site a little better and maybe post a couple more.im gonna take a look at your poetry so I'm excited for that . last thing PLEASE if you see any more I pay I would like the ugly truth:)) thanks ..
Ps My choice

Offline Heartsongsdiary

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Re: Everyday life.
« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2021, 07:21:43 PM »
Thank you so much for your reply.Ill be honest,I am very inexperienced with this and recently I've been enjoying writing poetry (very amatur ) and I came on this site because I wanted people to be very straight forward if I was useless.even a beginner.so what you wrote back and advice you kindly gave meant a lot.i will try to understand the site a little better and maybe post a couple more.im gonna take a look at your poetry so I'm excited for that . last thing PLEASE if you see any more I pay I would like the ugly truth:)) thanks ..
Ps My choice

You are welcome. We are all poets ,at heart. The more one writes the more natural it becomes putting ones thoughts into words.  I am a heart-writer.  I write my thoughts in poetry form because poetry is like the notes of music. Words are just words until heart moves them.  Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.   jt
Be who you are...not everyone will like you but those that matter will. jt

Offline sasharat

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Re: Everyday life.
« Reply #4 on: December 07, 2021, 02:59:38 PM »
It's a clever poem!  I don't agree with the premise, that we can always choose our emotions.  However, I think the poem was very cleverly written.