Author Topic: Fragmented (Short Story) [Drama/Adventure]  (Read 184 times)

Offline The Mystical Man

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Fragmented (Short Story) [Drama/Adventure]
« on: June 20, 2021, 02:35:38 PM »
Hello, I'm new here, and I would appreciate feedback on my short story.

Premise: A mother desperately tries to find a cure on the deepest layer of a secret organization to stop her sick son from dying.

Offline jt72

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Re: Fragmented (Short Story) [Drama/Adventure]
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2021, 03:22:26 PM »
Welcome to MWC.

If you haven't read the rules for posting in this thread;you might find this helpful: http://mywriterscircle.com/index.php?topic=24729.0
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