I know from the start
You're really smart.
Then you captured my heart
Hoping we'd never part.
I know that a trial
Needs no denial
But it was your dial
That made me special.
I know for sure
This love may endure
For it is selfless and pure
With you, I feel secure.
It's all worth the waiting
Missed chances were patching
Now we're rejoicing.
And God we're praising!
I know from the start
You're really smart.
Then you captured my heart
Hoping we'd never part.
I know that a trial
Needs no denial
But it was your dial
That made me special.
I know for sure
This love may endure
For it is selfless and pure
With you, I feel secure.
The poem broken down into stanzas creates a mood for
the thoughts to flow evenly.
The fourth stanza kilt the flow of the poem.
Just my opinion. Best of luck with your writing. jt
