Author Topic: I Know  (Read 256 times)

Offline ozofe

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I Know
« on: June 05, 2021, 03:26:54 AM »
I know from the start
You're really smart.
Then you captured my heart
Hoping we'd never part.
I know that a trial
Needs no denial
But it was your dial
That made me special.
I know for sure
This love may endure
For it is selfless and pure
With you, I feel secure.
It's all worth the waiting
Missed chances were patching
Now we're rejoicing.
And God we're praising!

Offline jt72

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Re: I Know
« Reply #1 on: June 05, 2021, 11:13:38 AM »
I know from the start
You're really smart.
Then you captured my heart
Hoping we'd never part.
I know that a trial
Needs no denial
But it was your dial
That made me special.
I know for sure
This love may endure
For it is selfless and pure
With you, I feel secure.
It's all worth the waiting
Missed chances were patching
Now we're rejoicing.
And God we're praising!

I know from the start
You're really smart.
Then you captured my heart
Hoping we'd never part.

I know that a trial
Needs no denial
But it was your dial
That made me special.

I know for sure
This love may endure
For it is selfless and pure
With you, I feel secure.


The poem broken down into stanzas creates a mood for
the thoughts to flow evenly.
The fourth stanza kilt the flow of the poem.

Just my opinion. Best of luck with your writing.   jt

 

Interesting the way the internet really works.   jt jt