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Offline Patrick.G

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The month that ruined he
« on: March 22, 2021, 08:39:01 PM »
A poem I wrote for a girl I am in love with, but have made little effort with in the past few months.#

I hope it hasnít ruined things,
The devil in his chest.
that forced him to neglect you
So please accept his request

He requests for you to remember
The boy he used to be
The boy from last September
Before November ruined he

He feels the devil leaving though.
And feels again that he can breathe
For you may be the one in which
Brought him back to reality

He thinks about you daily,
Sees you blowing in the breeze
Just like the leaves outside your window
That you watch swaying in the tree

He hopes that things may soon return
to how they used to be
So once again you may see the boy
From before November,
the month that ruined he.

Offline crch

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Re: The month that ruined he
« Reply #1 on: March 22, 2021, 10:41:25 PM »
Sweet poem -

I feel your pain - been there.

If I were that girl, I would really like to know what happened that November.

She might reply, and we could have a second stanza!