The Fire Within

[Dar_Var]

Oh! The fierce fire’s flames flew freely,

fluently flowing and fluttering with finesse,

while flickering its fickle flame frequently,

as its flare flips and forms a fortress,

and forces out the freezing fear finely.

 

Oh! The bursting blaze burns brightly,

Bringing belief and bestowing bravery,

And building the broken bricks and bailey,

Boasting, buried beneath, the brimming beauty,


-Sudarshan

[Dar_Var]

Kindly review the poetry and say your thoughts. Thanks

[jt72]

One only has to post one post...Yours shows as you posting same poem twice.

"Sudarshan" isn't there a chemical plant that goes by that name?

[Dar_Var]

Haha. That's just a common name in India.

[jt72]

Haha. That's just a common name in India.

I  learn something new every day.

[jt72]

Oh! The fierce fire’s flames flew freely,

fluently flowing and fluttering with finesse,

while flickering its fickle flame frequently,

as its flare flips and forms a fortress,

and forces out the freezing fear finely.

 

Oh! The bursting blaze burns brightly,

Bringing belief and bestowing bravery,

And building the broken bricks and bailey,

Boasting, buried beneath, the brimming beauty,


-Sudarshan

The poem speaks of relief from a  burden.  I like the flow of the words.