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Offline Royal Thorn 78

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Offline indar

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Re: Nodules in a Fuzzed Universe
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2021, 01:25:02 PM »
Fog stiffens at the trailhead

Here is a fine example of a grabber of a first line--I'm jealous I didn't think of it.

Offline JTetstone

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Re: Nodules in a Fuzzed Universe
« Reply #2 on: March 02, 2021, 09:40:50 PM »
The powers that be work in strange ways. I drew much insight from the words you wrote. I enjoyed reading your poem. :)
I was born and raised wearing hand me down shoes and clothes-but I was richer by far than those who thought themselves 'my betters.'  I'd take love over riches and fame any day.

Offline indar

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Re: like
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2021, 02:36:02 PM »
Roy, are you OK?

Offline Royal Thorn 78

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Re: like
« Reply #4 on: March 11, 2021, 07:51:27 PM »
Dissipating.  ;D ;D ;D

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Re: like
« Reply #5 on: March 11, 2021, 08:07:45 PM »
I expect you to reassemble elsewhere by April, preferably sooner. Obviously you are about to go poooof! here.

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Re: like
« Reply #6 on: March 11, 2021, 08:36:28 PM »
You read this perfectly. ;D 


Yes -- National Poetry Month!!! 


I shall . . . I shall!