Rewrite with a Rhymn

[hwillette]

I am stuck!

Can anyone help me rewrite this so it rhymns with simple words?

The line is about a cat who is discouraged about loosing another soccer game. It's a children's book (4-6yrs old). I keep circling back to this part not happy with what I have. I need a fresh look on it and suggestions. Thanks!

[hwillette]

Here it is...

"On Friday there was a soccer game.
Another loss was surely expected.
Only a minute left the scoreboard detected.

(Cat in uniform pouting with ball. Scoreboard behind him with only a few minutes left.

Not today.
Coach let him play.
Miles kicked the ball that saved the day."

Am I overthinking it? Does it sound ok?