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Offline crch

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Felines frolic in a fanciful frame...
« on: January 22, 2021, 05:11:44 PM »


Felines frolic in a fanciful frame,   
 feigning fortune, friendship and fame.

Follow the feathers and fringe on her frock,
 and a small furry foot you will find.

A fierce little face frightens her foe, and
furthers the feeling her fun has begun.

A French fedora falls from his paw as he
fights to future his faint.

A final flicker and flash of her tail proves
his freedom is far from over.

Forged into one’s frailty of mind, this painting may
be familiar.

Frankly, we must ask ourselves…
Is this feline fantasy really fiction?




Online Royal Thorn 78

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Re: Felines frolic in a fanciful frame...
« Reply #1 on: February 19, 2021, 05:01:02 PM »

What the "F"?  ;D ;D ;D

This is a delightful writing exercise -- you execute it well.
I like the cadence for this -- in most parts it is easy to read aloud.

It has the feeling of an elocution warm up. 

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Re: Felines frolic in a fanciful frame...
« Reply #2 on: February 19, 2021, 05:05:19 PM »
Hurray!!!

...had to look up elocution!

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Re: Felines frolic in a fanciful frame...
« Reply #3 on: February 19, 2021, 05:17:22 PM »
This must have been fun to write.   8)

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Re: Felines frolic in a fanciful frame...
« Reply #4 on: February 19, 2021, 05:24:17 PM »
More fun for someone to read it!
Really, they just happen.  Now, I get to go back and flesh them out.
You are the first to help.