Author Topic: Request in Feedback on 1st chapter of short fantasy Novel "The Christmas King"  (Read 53 times)

Offline TheCuckooClocksofHell

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This story is 4529 words. Though most of this first part has few magical elements, they will be more prevalent in later chapters. I'm looking for honest feedback and people are welcome to critique it on anything. I will possibly be posting later chapters here in the future if I find the forum helpful. This is my first post here so if I'm doing anything wrong, please let me know.

...and here it is.