Author Topic: Multi Level Murders  (Read 117 times)

Offline robertkayphd

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Multi Level Murders
« on: January 01, 2021, 05:20:16 PM »
Seeking beta readers for my most recent manuscript. Top line follows

Multi Level Murders... where people will kill to build their downline

A frigid, double tap slap in the face welcome to the world of Maachi and Bart. Two very rich guys who are the epitome of success at the expense of others. They created a billion dollar pharmaceutical and dietary supplement company by all the means at their disposal and now have vast sums of disposable income. Those piles of bitcoins feed their need for extreme thrills.

They are willingly trapped in the violent world of a company that specializes in Multi Level Murders. A place where people do anything to increase their downline. Even kill.

In the seam between good and evil, the athletes, worshippers of the Goddess Kali, the Thugee, law enforcement, and the extremely rich collide with each other and create a galactic level of shocking randomness. That dark place is where they engage each other in death dealing and obfuscation.

The battleground is the Covid infected United States where endless violent protests are reality TV. Only the manipulative and craftiest survive in this malevolent place where no one is to be trusted.

Maachi and Bart are players who are being played. In the midst of the MLM maelstrom they will need to be heartless apex alpha predators to survive and overcome the powerful forces of social unrest and conflict.

Have trust in that the lies are out there.

Offline bailish

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Re: Multi Level Murders
« Reply #1 on: January 02, 2021, 01:01:08 PM »
I'm having trouble understanding how multi-level murders work. It sounds like the goal is to get people to murder for you, but how do you do that if no one can be trusted? You ask a person to kill for you, but why would he? What's in it for him?

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Re: Multi Level Murders
« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2021, 02:10:04 PM »
Excellent points! All are answered in engaging detail in the manuscript. The motives, the agonists, the plot, the rationale...the bigger picture. Thanks for asking!