Hello! I'm looking for constructive criticism or preferably a beta for my story Ever Onwards: Dragons. It's a crossover between Naruto and the Inheritance Cycle (Eragon). The pairing is Naruto x Arya. However, I don't plan on the Inheritance Cycle being the end. Naruto will instead travel to other worlds, whether by design or accident. That's the long term plan.
What I'm looking for in a Beta reader is someone who can help improve dialogue and the flow of sentences and paragraphs. If at all possible, I would also like help in constructing a believable romance between Naruto and Arya...never really fell in love with anybody, so yep, definitely that.
Thank you!
