[Hi, this is my first post so please forgive me if I don't have this right just yet

This is my first draft of a poem I wrote for and about the person I love. I typically am very strict with rhyming patterns and syllables, which I pretty much threw away for this, so I'm afraid it sounds rather choppy? I'm starting to think it reads more like song lyrics. I am pretty pleased with most of my word choice, but would love critiques involving structure/flow.]
A Silly Old Soul Like Mine
i gazed upon a flickering star
singing a silent song
would it disrupt his solitude, were i to sing along?
it's hard not to think about why,
but my silly old soul and i,
we throw pebbles in ponds and we wave magic wands
and we wish for this star to fall by
you would swear that it came from the pages-
it seems like a story but it is a fact,
when two lovestruck children don't know how to act
they walk round in circles for ages-
then all at once everything changes
it's sudden- the world rearranges
and quickly all i do would be brighter, were there you
i knew i'd never rest,
but i never could have guessed
my dandelion wishes would come true