Hello this is my first poem, it's called Lone Flower in the Field. I want to know if this poem is good or bad. All critique is welcome.
Here goes:
Lone flower in the field,
Thy voice I have heard
Across the valleys and the hills,
The breeze carries thy name.
When the strong winds blow,
An island of cumulonimbus appears
And thunder split the ears,
Purple lightning is aglow.
Lone flower in the field,
Will thou uproot thyself and flee
To safety? — it cannot be;
From a storm, thou wilt not even yield.
Thou have no fear of death
For thou have lived thy life —
Not yesterday, nor tomorrow,
But now. Eternal is thy breath.
Lone flower in the field,
A blade is what I have held,
But today, I will throw it away
And I will dance with thee.