Author Topic: In Daylight  (Read 537 times)

Offline indar

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In Daylight
« on: May 29, 2020, 05:37:18 PM »
The dying body beneath him
gushed feces and urine.
He leaned forward, harder,
fingered himself from his pocket
in secret joy.

Offline ssilvs

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Re: In Daylight
« Reply #1 on: July 22, 2020, 11:31:11 PM »
well, this is certainly something. gotta say, nothing about this guy’s “joy” sounds secret  ;D
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Offline Nora

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Re: In Daylight
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2020, 01:28:43 PM »
I have to say, I feel a little dirty now having read that