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Offline WilsonJWilson

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« on: November 14, 2019, 11:18:54 PM »
Would someone be kind enough to critique one of my short stories (2000 words) It's a historical/fantasy fiction piece set in 1899 during the Boer War.
here's the link
https://wilsonjwilson.wordpress.com/2019/11/12/the-burning-men-of-magersfontein/
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« Reply #1 on: November 24, 2019, 12:03:54 AM »
Would someone be kind enough to critique one of my short stories (2000 words) It's a historical/fantasy fiction piece set in 1899 during the Boer War.
here's the link
https://wilsonjwilson.wordpress.com/2019/11/12/the-burning-men-of-magersfontein/
Warmies
WJW


WJW, I clicked on the link .It said 'page not found'.  I don't know what happened, but best of luck with your writing.   jt
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