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Offline Country Girl43

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Along came a spider
« on: September 07, 2019, 03:15:16 PM »
This is something I wrote on my blog.
I hope you all enjoy it. Feel free to give me feedback. 😁

"Along Came A Spider"
While laying on my bed writing along comes a black spider! I tried to kill it with paper. The spider survived my paper attack and ran off towards the head of the bed and down between the wall and the bed. I searched everywhere, under my pillow, blanket. I even Threw the pillows, blankets all my stuff. Shook the hell out of everything!! Nope NO SPIDER!! I can not rest or sleep until that spider is found and killed!! This is not going to be a good night.

Even if I slept with the covers over my head he could find a way in!! I told my boyfriend maybe we should leave a snack or crumbs for him then when he comes back I kill it and make sure he's dead! My boyfriend didn't find that too funny. Iím not sleeping until the spider from hell is dead and he goes down the toilet to make sure he won't be back!

This is the Night from hell.!! With this black spider hanging around. No pun intended lol. Update... While I went out of the room to get a drink after my stressful time with Mr. spider, my boyfriend comes out and says the spider is dead. He killed it.

He searched for it where I told him it had gone. He pulled the mattress away from the wall. Low and behold Mr. black spider was just strolling along coming out from that corner of the bed.

Yay!! So happy. But now everything freaks me out. I can't stop looking to make sure he didn't have friends out for a Thursday night feast. Trying to get it together and calm down. Eventually I will. But I'm always going to be watching to make sure Mr. Spider or Mrs. Spider didn't have a family.


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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #1 on: September 07, 2019, 03:30:35 PM »
Hi Country Girl43, I read this one on your blog. I don't like spiders either but I really liked reading "Along Came a Spider."   

Keep Writing,

 Jan
 
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Offline Contrapasso

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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #2 on: September 07, 2019, 09:28:29 PM »
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Offline Country Girl43

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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2019, 09:55:18 PM »
It says share your WRITING! That's what I did.

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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #4 on: September 07, 2019, 09:56:18 PM »
I'm 43 but thank you for the compliment.

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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2019, 10:37:07 PM »
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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #6 on: September 07, 2019, 10:51:48 PM »
You think Your opinion matters too! It doesn't. Your a newbie here too. I write about all kinds of stuff.

So you must think you are better than everyone here I take it!? What have you written?
I write about stuff relatable and stuff that happens in everyday life on my blog I have.
So sorry you didn't like it. You should of just gone by my post.

Your complaints and negative response is does not belong here!! You are clogging up the forum topic under this thread! Next time you feel a need to be rude and negative then don't post it here! I'm sure there's a forum somewhere called "bitch and complain'  you would do great there!
Best of luck to you!  Buh bye!
Don't keep replying.

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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2019, 10:58:22 PM »
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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #8 on: September 07, 2019, 11:29:44 PM »
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« Reply #9 on: September 07, 2019, 11:47:05 PM »
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Re: Along came a spider
« Reply #10 on: September 08, 2019, 01:47:35 AM »
I don't know why young women have to constant urge to declare "muh boyfriend" to the world. Your post doesn't belong here. This isn't your personal blog.

Sorry  but I fail to see the reasoning behind this post.  Whether it's a blog post or not, it is a story posted on 'review my work' .  Not trying to offend anyone.  Just my thoughts, after reading the comments.    jt
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