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Offline Hunter

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My first page of my new script
« on: June 06, 2019, 12:39:33 AM »
INT. SPACESHIP - NIGHT

TURNER, 40s, with his suit tied to his waist, enters the bridge.
                         
                                             TURNER
                       Report.

An inhuman voice, KIRA, speaks.

                                             KIRA (O.S.)
                       Twenty-eight days.

A younger man, STEVE, sits at a monitor. He swivels around to Turner, points at the window.
                                             STEVE
                       Hey, Cap’, you need to see this.

Turner sets his gaze to the window - a dark hole in their path.

                                           TURNER
                      What the hell is that?

JOHN, 30s, turns his attention to it.

                                           JOHN
                      It sure as shit isn‘t a black hole.

                                          TURNER
                     We wouldn’t be having this conversation
                     if it were.

STACEY, next to John, speaks.
                                       
                                          STACEY
                     Vortex?

Turner turns to the pilot, NATHAN.
                 
                                         TURNER
                    Why are we moving closer to it?

Nathan looks as if he’s seen a ghost.

                                        NATHAN
                    It‘s not me. It’s pulling u — —

— — The spaceship RATTLES and suddenly gets sucked into it.


                                                                  FADE TO BLACK.