Hello all
So, my story is aimed at young adults so I would say from 16 to 21 type of age. This is my audience. Could you tell me how you would read this line. I am fine with the English / grammar but feel that this could be read two ways. For a bit of background, Abigail (the protagonist) has just met her stepbrother for the first time and he is a complete (ass###e) to her and storms off in the middle of an argument. His name is Connor.
I am just aware that in some countries / places that the wording I have used could be misunderstood.
If you could please tell me what how you took the meaning of this I would really appreciate it.
Thank you in advance.
M J
I must admit, it was the best display of man-tantrum I had ever seen, even better than Ben’s after I’d blown him off for the third time.