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Offline poetryman123

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To A Friend
« on: March 05, 2019, 05:51:45 PM »
Dear friend
I’ve headed back home from work

The stretching of my back pulled
like rubber-bands.
The day was well and surely fair

You make me feel wonderful.
I love talking to you and the
reassurance It brings

Let me pour you a glass
of water.
We’ll laugh about the
people beside us like
hyenas
« Last Edit: March 05, 2019, 06:09:04 PM by poetryman123 »
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Offline heartsongjt

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Re: To A Friend
« Reply #1 on: March 05, 2019, 09:02:20 PM »


Dear friend
Ive headed back home from work

The stretching of my back pulled
like rubber-bands.
The day was well and surely fair

You make me feel wonderful.
I love talking to you and the
reassurance It brings

Let me pour you a glass
of water.
Well laugh about the
people beside us like
hyenas

Very nice piece of writing. Some might call it a short 'letter' because it begin "Dear friend" but your words draw a beautiful picture of what 'real'  friendship is.      Jan
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Offline poetryman123

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Re: To A Friend
« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2019, 11:50:35 AM »
Thanks for commenting.
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Offline heartsongjt

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Re: To A Friend
« Reply #3 on: March 06, 2019, 08:10:46 PM »
Thanks for commenting.

You Welcome. Thank you for posting your work on MWC boards.
Jan
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Offline Fairfaxpoet

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Re: To A Friend
« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2019, 08:55:01 AM »
Sounds like my day