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Offline Karinanovak

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Hello everyone
Will be delighted if you could please give your opinion on the first 5 chapters of my fantasy novel.
It has been through a huge re write and i hope now it works better.

The story follows Erobre, a light elf resided in iceland in Nordic times. He is plagued by visions of his future lives. Throughout the tale two deities will attempt to sway him to make a decision that might unmake the modern world.
I have added a pdf of the first 5 chapters in case you cannot open the website.
Your feedback will be greatly appreciated.
Chapter 1
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/KarinaNovakMonso/2085741/
Chapter 2
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/KarinaNovakMonso/2090492/
Chapter 3
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/KarinaNovakMonso/2092686/
Chapter 4
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/KarinaNovakMonso/2099838/
Chapter 5
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/KarinaNovakMonso/2101816/
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Re: First three chapters , a fantasy novel (of elves and northern gods)
« Reply #1 on: February 15, 2019, 06:24:42 PM »
Sorry, I am not a member of that site. It would be nice if you posted your story on MWC.  Jan
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Re: First three chapters , a fantasy novel (of elves and northern gods)
« Reply #2 on: February 15, 2019, 06:35:56 PM »
Sorry, what is MWC?

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Re: First three chapters , a fantasy novel (of elves and northern gods)
« Reply #3 on: February 15, 2019, 06:48:19 PM »
Sorry, what is MWC?

MyWritersCircle  "MWC"  Sorry, I should have clarified what the letters [ MWC]  stand for.    Jan
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Re: First three chapters , a fantasy novel (of elves and northern gods)
« Reply #4 on: February 15, 2019, 07:06:09 PM »
I have added a pdf document. Thank you for your guidance😄. Since i am new to this website it will take me a little bit to acclimate.

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Re: First three chapters , a fantasy novel (of elves and northern gods)
« Reply #5 on: February 15, 2019, 07:24:35 PM »
I have added a pdf document. Thank you for your guidance😄. Since i am new to this website it will take me a little bit to acclimate.

Thank you. I open pdf documents, but many MWC members don't.
Thank you, for introducing me to a new word 'acclimate'.
Best of luck with your writing.
Jan
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Re: First three chapters , a fantasy novel (of elves and northern gods)
« Reply #6 on: February 15, 2019, 08:06:18 PM »
Hello everyone
Will be delighted if you could please givve your opinion on the first 3 chapters of my fantasy novel.

The story follows Erobre, a light elf resided in iceland in Nordic times. He is plagued by visions of his future lives. Throughout the tale two deities will attempt to sway him to make a decision that might unmake the modern world.
I have added a pdf of the first 3 chapters in case you cannot open the website.
Your feedback will be greatly appreciated.

I just finished reading the first chapter.  It's a good story, and very well written.     Jan
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Re: First three chapters , a fantasy novel (of elves and northern gods)
« Reply #7 on: February 16, 2019, 12:50:02 AM »
Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy tge rest as well.

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Re: First three chapters , a fantasy novel (of elves and northern gods)
« Reply #8 on: February 16, 2019, 04:59:54 PM »
Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy tge rest as well.

You welcome.
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