Author Topic: Delusion And Fate  (Read 256 times)

Offline tripleig

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Delusion And Fate
« on: July 06, 2018, 07:44:06 AM »
Falling back to your ex?
Because the next
Is cheating or feeling someone else
Or should you proceed to the third?

The ex
Wanted back but you're scared
Is there a cooked plan behind the stage?
Or she really repents to meet reality of the day?

Thinking about the Third
Is that how you will continue dating plenty girls?
You prayed
But Delusions surround the fate

You dun Vex
Maybe you should just flex
But STD and Aids are everywhere!
Even your money go dey waste

DON 3PLE-IG

J TETSTONE

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Re: Delusion And Fate
« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2018, 04:55:03 PM »
Your poem is deep . . .  emotion seems to be interrupting  your concentration.  Have you tried recording yourself reading your poem and then listening to its flows. Love hurts sometimes. I've found love also has a way of healing. . .

Best of luck with your writing.         jt