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Offline suudie

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Intro to a short story - 700ish words
« on: June 13, 2018, 01:28:16 AM »
Hey everyone. Iím in the midst of putting a rather long short story together. Itís clocking in at 4 thousand words and Iím only just now getting to the middle of the it, so it may in fact end up becoming a novella. Who knows. But Iíd really like some feedback on the opening of the story. Whatís your impression and do you want to keep reading? Let me know your thoughts! Hereís the link:

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Re: Intro to a short story - 700ish words
« Reply #1 on: June 13, 2018, 12:53:37 PM »
I tried to access your Google Doc, but it told me I was denied access. The normal way to get reviews is to copy the text and paste it in this forum.