Author Topic: "The Abyss" Please review it! It's about ww1 and is my first poem  (Read 92 times)

Offline JackDawes12

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In the trenches, teeming with death,
A place where countless take their final breath.
We, the petrified, await our turn
While mother's mourn.
The earth, thrown violently,
Boys fell silently
All perish
In ways considered hellish,
Now we lay below the ground,
Our lives marked by a mound.