Author Topic: FEEDBACK on thriller i am writing, Along the Highline  (Read 142 times)

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FEEDBACK on thriller i am writing, Along the Highline
« on: March 19, 2018, 02:07:05 PM »
Hello all,

i am very new to screenwriting now i know this story itself isnt very original and the dialogue is probably not very good, i am more looking for feedback on the layout and pace and structure if possible?

any and all feedback is obviously appreciated

thanks