Did I do alright for the first time writing a poem

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Offline Sonder

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« on: March 17, 2018, 12:14:46 AM »
Ambivalent Girl is Muted for so long
trying to break the Chain but it needed something Strong

Strong like a Voice that causes seismic waves or echolocation by the range
My inner Thoughts is loquacious hiding in caves

I feel the excitement, sadness, and anger coming out like a ball shattered a window
Pieces that can't be put together
The ball is to escape from my dumb self but no shattered sound just deaf and I wonder.