So.
Seeing that this forum has gone to the dogs and the only two members who sent me their entries have now also joined the new spam-free forum, I think it would be best to just move this challenge over to our new home.
I'll set things up there shortly and provide a direct link to the challenge thread.
Meanwhile, why don't you all join our new place, as Gyppo already suggested too?
https://bestwritingforum.com/index.php