Author Topic: Frozen Snowman Parody, Help me review my comedy song!  (Read 964 times)

Offline BailsTheNoShellSnail

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Frozen Snowman Parody, Help me review my comedy song!
« on: July 18, 2017, 12:48:25 AM »
Hello, I am a young highschool student who needs opinions on their comedy song. Any advice would be good:  :)

Frozen parody script:
[Sam heads down to playground by sailors]
Sam: Ahh the docks nothing but the smell of seagull turd and the sound of the waves. [walks up to playground]
[Random guy blocks Samís path]
Sam: Good day sir.   
Guy: Only people who work at the sea are allowed here.
Sam: Why?
Guy: Itís the rules.
Sam: What is your job in the sea then?
Guy: I am a Siemen.
Sam: Why canít I just play on this playground?
Siemen: Itís the rules you can only play if you work in the ocean or with me.
Sam: Whatís your name so I can remember you?
Siemen: We go by what are jobs are, thats are names.
Sam: So how can I get in and play.
Siemen: I guess you could play with me in the playground.
Sam: [dashes off]
[Sam heads back home and kicks open the door and runs to the bedroom]
Sam: [knocks on door] *frozen music starts ĖDo you want to build a snowman*

Lyrics:
Sam: Do you want to play with Siemen?
Bailey: What please say that again? Sorry Sam but as you recall I have never been gay.
Sam: He is waiting for us to play with him, Donít make him wait he is getting hot.
Sam: Do you want to play with Siemen?
Bailey: No I just washed my hands.
Sam: Iím not going away.