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Offline bobby22222

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Read this script
« on: March 09, 2017, 10:36:53 AM »
So some issues with this script. Jamie and the anarchist are the same character. At one moment Fidel turns into Carlos. This is because the deadline was before I was able to polish the script. I just really want to know if my sense of humour connects with anyone.

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Re: Read this script
« Reply #1 on: March 09, 2017, 12:31:57 PM »
Uh?

I suggest you post this in the Review My Script thread - and paste a sample of the script rather than a link. We don't click on links for obvious reasons.

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Offline Laura H

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Re: Read this script
« Reply #2 on: March 10, 2017, 07:56:22 AM »
Bobby, we ask that you post sections on the boards if you want feedback. That way, all the writers benefit from advice and insights.
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