Too many words...

[Mark with a k]

I have an unfinished essay of sorts that I'd like to submit for comments but it's too big. Help!


Mark

[Lin]

Hi Mark,

Maybe you could post a portion of it, say a few paras, get some comments and then later on more.   I feel sure that a short excerpt from the text will give the reader some ideas and feel for the essay.   I know when I read something, its the first few lines which "Talk" to me.  So maybe a portion of this would help to gain enough comments to give you some ideas.

If you want to send me some reading - I would be glad to take a peek.- books in Holland cost a fortune!!!   Im finding the work I receive from Writers Circle is keeping me in reading material and that is so interesting, better than buying the books I think!!

All the best with this

Lin

[jay_fonacier]

Try to publish it using any weblog publishing tool for us to view the essay. Then we'll read and give some expert feedback on it.

[jay_fonacier]

Oops I'm sorry for this one,. I didn't notice that this was an old thread

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[HPvD]

You might be able to write a Summary of it
to get a general idea what's it about, and
put up a part that people can comment on....?