Hello, my name is Lucas Knight and this is the opening scenes for the pilot episode of "Jason's World". "Jason's World" is a drama/comedy series that I'm currently working on. I hope you guys enjoy reading it and can't wait to hear what you think. All harsh feedback is totally welcome.
These are the opening scenes:
FADE IN:
INT. JASON’S APARTMENT- NIGHT
TITLE: NEW YORK CITY, NY
Jason, age 24, bursts through the door with his nymphomaniac girlfriend, Felicity, forcing herself onto him.
As they make their way to the bed, Jason tries to passive aggressively inquire about his discomfort. She continuously kisses him and bites his lip, giving him no chance to speak.
JASON
You know... We could maybe sit together and watch a movie.
FELICITY
Hmmm... How about we make one instead?
Felicity grabs Jason’s hands and forces him to grip her breasts.
FELICITY (CONT’D)
How does that feel?
JASON
I guess only you would know.
Felicity pushes Jason onto the bed and climbs on top of him.
FELICITY
I want you inside me. I want us to both cum, like clockwork!
Felicity takes her shirt off.
JASON
Wait!... Um... Can you hold on?
Felicity grabs his crotch.
FELICITY
To this?

Jason turns away from her.
JASON
I’m sorry... I just... need a moment.
FELICITY
Jason, I’m practically throwing myself at you. Any other guy would have started fucking me by now. What, am I not sexy enough?
JASON
No! No... you’re beautiful... It’s just... I want to savor this. You know? I don’t want to treat you like a...
FELICITY
Slut?
JASON
Not... I... I value what we...
FELICITY
Jason, I want to be slutty for you. I want you to defile me!
JASON
Oh!... No... You don’t mean that...
FELICITY
We can take it slow... why don’t I get it started for you?
Felicity removes her panties from under her skirt and throws them at Jason. She then starts to touch herself.
FELICITY (CONT’D)
You like to watch me?
JASON
I, um...
FELICITY
Yeah, you love watching me. You dirty boy.
JASON
Yeah... Good... Good stuff... I’m so... dirty...
Felicity motions him to go down on her.
FELICITY
Guess what, baby... It’s time for you to eat your dessert!
JASON
Oh... You know, I’m already full...
Felicity grabs Jason’s head and practically forces oral sex. She starts to moan immediately.
FELICITY
Oh god... How’s it taste?
JASON
It, um... It... tastes.
FELICITY
Go faster...
JASON
Faster, already?
FELICITY
Stop being a bitch and eat my pussy, Jason!
Jason starts to lick even faster and faster.
FELICITY (CONT’D)
Yeah! Yeah! You dirty motherfucker! Eat it! Eat it, god damn it!
Felicity starts to scream obnoxiously.
FELICITY (CONT’D)
I’m cumming... It’s cumming for you Jason!
Felicity, unexpectedly, squirts onto Jason’s face. Jason immediately purges off the side of the bed. They both sit in silence.
FELICITY (CONT’D)
Jesus Christ, Jason! Are you okay?
JASON
Now I really need a moment...
Jason runs to the bathroom to rinse his mouth out and contemplate.
Felicity, still laying on his bed, sees the drawer to his night stand slightly cracked open. She leans over and opens the drawer. She finds a gay mens’ magazine.
Felicity quickly collects her belongings and leaves the apartment. Jason comes out of the bathroom.
JASON (CONT’D)
I am so sorry about...
Jason notices that Felicity took off. He sees his drawer open, with his porn magazine exposed. He starts pulling his hair out of distress.
JASON (CONT’D)
Shit... Shit!
Jason sits on the bed and glances at his cell phone. Eight missed calls and seven text messages from his mother.
JASON (CONT’D)
Jesus Christ. Not right now, mom.
INT. CONFERENCE ROOM- NEXT DAY
Jason stares at his phone. A text from his mother reads “The only one you’re hurting is yourself.” Another message appears. “Have it your way.” One more. “Can you at least let me know you’re ok?”
Jason’s boss, Bill Sanders (late 40’s), suddenly calls him to attention. Jason is caught off guard. He is in the middle of a meeting with advertising account executives, surrounded by Type-A coworkers in business attire.
BILL
Jason!... Is there a problem?
JASON
No, no problem... It’s just my mom, she blows up my phone... You know how it is.
BILL
Well you’re mom’s gonna love this new product! You know, the one the rest of this team is investing into?
JASON
I’m sorry sir.
BILL
Now... if you’re done suckling on your mama’s titties... Let’s proceed!
Bill opens up a power point presentation projected onto the white board. He introduces the sex enhancement product they are marketing.
BILL (CONT’D)
Sexual enhancement! Bringing unsatisfied couples together... Studies have shown an increase of happiness through unhappy marriages. A perfectly marketable substance for the elderly. So what’s the problem here? These old fucks... They die off. They don’t need it anymore. Now, if we can appeal to a younger generation... Imagine the profit! Especially in today’s world. We see it from all angles: Media, reality television, music... Sex is more rampant than we’ve ever seen.
Everyone is the meeting room is drawn to Bill's every word.
BILL (CONT’D)
We need names people... New names that today’s generation can trust. Society is done with bullshit gas station drugs, and they’re sure as hell too ashamed to go to their doctor for Viagra.
A coworker, Thomas, raises his hand.
BILL (CONT’D)
Thomas!
THOMAS
How about Aphrodite? You know, the goddess of sexual desire.
BILL
Cliche... Intrigue, people! Come on!
Another coworker, Kevin, raises his hand.
KEVIN
Happiness!
BILL
Did I not just say intrigue?
KEVIN
It’s a play on words, see? Hap-Penis.
BILL
We’re not looking for play on words Kevin!
Jason sees another text from his mother when Bill again calls him to attention.
BILL (CONT’D)
Jason!
Jason jumps to attention.
BILL (CONT’D)
Any ideas?
JASON
Um... what about... Clockwork?
BILL
Clockwork?
JASON
You know... He cums... She cums.. Its like clockwork?

Jason waits for Bill’s response. Bill hesitates.
BILL
Clockwork... That’s brilliant!.
