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Tom 10
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November 20, 2014, 10:39:19 AM »
Rat Splat
On scorching pavement
harder baked makes easier
in one piece to spatulate
the rat-splat, purple-dark,
just like that, the Rorschach
tire mat, full-shocked
former fluff of Flemish cat.
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Mark T
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November 20, 2014, 10:45:49 AM »
You're one sick puppy, Tom.
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Tom 10
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Why thank you Mark.
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heidi52
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November 21, 2014, 08:20:15 AM »
Too funny.
Spatulate
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Tom 10
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Quote from: heidi52 on November 21, 2014, 08:20:15 AM
Too funny.
Spatulate
I verbified it.
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heidi52
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Quote from: Tom 10 on November 21, 2014, 09:19:08 AM
I verbified it.
Obviously, it should have been a verb all along.
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510bhan
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November 21, 2014, 06:07:49 PM »
This is class!
It rivals flat cat.
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Tom 10
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November 22, 2014, 09:19:31 AM »
Quote from: 510bhan on November 21, 2014, 06:07:49 PM
This is class!
It rivals flat cat.
Flat Cat?
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510bhan
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November 22, 2014, 08:10:05 PM »
Can't find the poem in the search . . . the one about a A Dog Lover's something or other for a cat. Travelling the roads in NI over Ligoneil Hill etc.and poor old flat cat getting stuck to the tyres.
EDIT: Found it !
http://mywriterscircle.com/index.php?topic=48494.0
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November 23, 2014, 10:07:43 AM »
How could I forget "Flat cat, squashed on the tarmac"! That was a wonderful poem. Thanks for recalling it
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Vienna
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November 23, 2014, 10:42:24 AM »
it's a bit like the childrens tv programme theme.
Post man Pat, Postman Pat
Postman Pat ran over his cat
lalalalalala
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