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Offline Tom 10

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Rat Splat
« on: November 20, 2014, 10:39:19 AM »

   Rat Splat

On scorching pavement
harder baked makes easier
in one piece to spatulate
the rat-splat, purple-dark,
just like that, the Rorschach
tire mat, full-shocked
former fluff of Flemish cat.


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Offline Mark T

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #1 on: November 20, 2014, 10:45:49 AM »

You're one sick puppy, Tom.  ;D
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Offline Tom 10

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #2 on: November 20, 2014, 10:47:18 AM »
Why thank you Mark. 8)
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Offline heidi52

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #3 on: November 21, 2014, 08:20:15 AM »
Too funny.

Spatulate  ;D ;D ;D
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Offline Tom 10

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #4 on: November 21, 2014, 09:19:08 AM »
Quote from: heidi52 on November 21, 2014, 08:20:15 AM
Too funny.

Spatulate  ;D ;D ;D

I verbified it. 8)
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Offline heidi52

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #5 on: November 21, 2014, 02:01:49 PM »
Quote from: Tom 10 on November 21, 2014, 09:19:08 AM
I verbified it. 8)

Obviously, it should have been a verb all along.  ;D ;D ;D
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Offline 510bhan

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #6 on: November 21, 2014, 06:07:49 PM »
This is class! ;D It rivals flat cat. ;)
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Offline Tom 10

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2014, 09:19:31 AM »
Quote from: 510bhan on November 21, 2014, 06:07:49 PM
This is class! ;D It rivals flat cat. ;)

Flat Cat?
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Offline 510bhan

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #8 on: November 22, 2014, 08:10:05 PM »
Can't find the poem in the search . . . the one about a A Dog Lover's something or other for a cat. Travelling the roads in NI over Ligoneil Hill etc.and poor old flat cat getting stuck to the tyres. ;D

EDIT: Found it ! :D     http://mywriterscircle.com/index.php?topic=48494.0
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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #9 on: November 23, 2014, 10:07:43 AM »
How could I forget "Flat cat, squashed on the tarmac"!  That was a wonderful poem. Thanks for recalling it  8)
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Offline Vienna

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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #10 on: November 23, 2014, 10:42:24 AM »
it's a bit like the childrens tv programme theme.


Post man Pat, Postman Pat
Postman Pat ran over his cat
lalalalalala
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Re: Rat Splat
« Reply #11 on: November 23, 2014, 10:42:53 AM »
 ;D ;D
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