I agree with CP about most of this. My one reservation about this poem is the phrase "the eyes in the mirror." In a poem about love, I found this kind of self-referentiality out of place. And I think the metaphors connecting love and vision are on the whole played out.
Great work overall, though. That line "the way the creek works the bank around every curve" is truly stunning. That it's a creek and not a river fortifies the argument of the poem about little things and small hesitancies so well.