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Offline *Lorraine*

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An attempt at Japanese haiku
« on: October 14, 2006, 07:03:40 AM »
Inspired by my view of the next door neighbour's garden this morning.


Rosy ripe Pipins
Greet the harvest basket:
The apple tree boughs.


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Offline CarrieSheppard

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Re: An attempt at Japanese haiku
« Reply #1 on: October 14, 2006, 08:07:55 AM »
like the play on words in the last line, clever stuff!

Carrie