Author Topic: Short Script Gold Mine  (Read 2414 times)


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Short Script Gold Mine
« on: July 20, 2014, 07:40:31 AM »
For the heck of things here is my full script for Gold Mine. Please tell me what you think.
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Modified to reduce font size and remove all caps writing which is considered yelling.
« Last Edit: July 20, 2014, 01:07:50 PM by Alice, a Country Gal »

Offline n.o. yousman

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Re: Short Script Gold Mine
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2014, 03:24:47 PM »
i think the concept of finding gold inside of a body is an interesting one. i'd be more interested in reading/watching the back story of how that happened, though, than the gold-looting fiasco. the majority of what happens here doesn't feel very realistic to me. it would be one thing if this was intended as a comedy, but i think you're writing something a little more serious. if this is intended as a drama/thriller, i'd do more research into hospital security to develop more realistic plots. if you want it to be a comedy, i'd say have lots of fun and go really, really wild with it.

but still, i think the back story of the gold smuggler would be fun to see.