heron (swearing - one eff-word)

[Mark T]

A good poem. Well-handled wordplay and cadence. The scene is visually there and the craft and composition of the piece is pleasing. Nice writing.

[pnokio]

Thank you CP - and I agree - as it happened, I pressed the 'post' button too early - I'm sure you're right - I'll think about it in the morning and get back to you - I'm going to send it somewhere - yes, I'm sure you're right - till tomorrow then - thank you.