Author Topic: heron (swearing - one eff-word)  (Read 3294 times)

Offline Mark T

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Re: heron (swearing - one eff-word)
« Reply #15 on: June 04, 2014, 01:54:12 PM »

A good poem. Well-handled wordplay and cadence. The scene is visually there and the craft and composition of the piece is pleasing. Nice writing.

Offline pnokio

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Re: heron (swearing - one eff-word)
« Reply #16 on: June 04, 2014, 07:00:42 PM »
Thank you CP - and I agree - as it happened, I pressed the 'post' button too early - I'm sure you're right - I'll think about it in the morning and get back to you - I'm going to send it somewhere - yes, I'm sure you're right - till tomorrow then - thank you.