Author Topic: My short script for stage 950 words, requesting reviews!  (Read 1730 times)

Offline Fin Burn

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My short script for stage 950 words, requesting reviews!
« on: February 24, 2014, 10:46:50 PM »
any feedback at all would be awesome  ;D
its not too long at all, and i think its worth a read

Offline DistantSun

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Re: My short script for stage 950 words, requesting reviews!
« Reply #1 on: February 24, 2014, 11:04:52 PM »
Hi there! It would be great if you could post an introduction over in the Welcome board. Another tip to keep in mind is that we encourage members to participate on the boards by commenting on ther members' work before posting something for review 😊

(One more tip - members are very wary of clicking on external links. Try posting a portion of the work you're seeking help with instead.)
« Last Edit: February 24, 2014, 11:07:32 PM by DistantSun »
It's good to laugh at yourself once in a while - why let everyone else have all the fun!
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Offline Skylan

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Re: My short script for stage 950 words, requesting reviews!
« Reply #2 on: February 24, 2014, 11:10:54 PM »
In addition to the above, this also belongs in the Review My Script Board.  ;)

Offline Fin Burn

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Re: My short script for stage 950 words, requesting reviews!
« Reply #3 on: February 24, 2014, 11:44:44 PM »
thank you guys, thanks a lot