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Offline Irshaad

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Re: short short film script
« Reply #15 on: February 27, 2014, 12:22:31 PM »
ok 2par. I will read. Thank you. :)

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Re: short short film script
« Reply #16 on: February 28, 2014, 01:10:16 PM »
I really like the approach you are taking. A depressed person finding hope in the world, it sends out a message to people. That is why I feel like this would work better as a thirty second commercial then a film script. If you could expand on it a little, I feel like you could have something here.

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Offline Irshaad

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Re: short short film script
« Reply #17 on: March 01, 2014, 01:47:25 AM »
thank you jackson. I appriciate your positive reply. I am working on it. I over come my faults.