Author Topic: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac  (Read 30058 times)

Offline Pam LaPier

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #270 on: September 04, 2015, 03:38:11 PM »
Glass shards razor sharp cut a hole in the light and set loose the dark scream
"Part of me suspects that I'm a loser, and the other part of me thinks I'm God Almighty." John Lennon

Offline Pam LaPier

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #271 on: September 04, 2015, 03:40:05 PM »
Cool thread
"Part of me suspects that I'm a loser, and the other part of me thinks I'm God Almighty." John Lennon

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #272 on: September 04, 2015, 04:34:23 PM »
Glass shards razor sharp cut a hole in the light and set loose the dark scream

Nice!

Offline Pam LaPier

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #273 on: September 04, 2015, 04:56:58 PM »
It's actually part of a poem I wrote when Robin Williams died. I'll post the whole thing tomorrow. Did you see my Coming Home poem?
"Part of me suspects that I'm a loser, and the other part of me thinks I'm God Almighty." John Lennon

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #274 on: September 04, 2015, 04:58:13 PM »
Do you think I have talent Tom or am I wasting time with this?
"Part of me suspects that I'm a loser, and the other part of me thinks I'm God Almighty." John Lennon

Offline AntonioM

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #275 on: February 21, 2016, 03:35:05 AM »
Poetrying to tame the wilds of my mind with a pen, again.
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Offline Mark T

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #276 on: February 21, 2016, 06:49:02 AM »

Letters, words and sentences sensibly glued together with grammar.


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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #277 on: February 21, 2016, 08:29:16 AM »
While bodies rot in a great grass sea, souls ride wind in twists of horsehair.
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"Poetry is not speech raised to the level of music, but music brought down to the level of speech." - Paul Valery

Offline Tom 10

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #278 on: February 21, 2016, 10:59:32 AM »
Antonio, Mark, Cornelius -

Nifty American Sentences, really good stuff. 

The current Poetry Challenge is tailor-made for The American Sentence as well as haiku, Kerouac Haiku, and such other short poetics as may be inspired.

Check it out, and by all means enter, enter, enter.  We are going for the record - you can be a part of it! :)

http://mywriterscircle.com/index.php?topic=59620.0


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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #279 on: February 28, 2016, 02:54:44 PM »

Time again will turn on end
what takes up arms in dawning light-
Come, come, we run in packs.

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #280 on: November 20, 2017, 04:15:45 PM »

Mud-frozen petrification
a face waits in rock
for your hand

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #281 on: December 09, 2017, 06:30:53 PM »




When Rosemary’s gone
google gives alternatives–
savory . . . and thyme










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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #282 on: December 09, 2017, 07:42:32 PM »
Remember the day
you realized that Santa
fell in the furnace?

hey--I followed form

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Re: The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac
« Reply #283 on: December 11, 2017, 12:01:26 PM »
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