The American Sentence / American Haiku / Kerouac

[bri h]

bri, bless your heart, we try not to nit pick comments when we need to save so much for the actual poems

We do? When did this happen? Why was I not informed? 
 
 

[Tom 10]

spring melt, a pause
snow never thought
would last.

[Mark T]

Mist

Browsing my valley,
a white fluff of myst'ry
curls below the sun.

Somehow I know I’ll forget
this, before the day is done.      

[Tom 10]

Mark - sorry I missed your new one -- I like!

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resting teal ruffle night reeds
until the moving earth again 
points them toward sun

[rosez]

Longings.
 
          Longings left to float freely
    Swim through life's ocean zest fully
       Asphyxiate when unfulfilled.


ps:a slight change was made for getting 17.will this be counted?

[CorneliusPoe]

Very nice Rose.

[CorneliusPoe]

Greeted by crisp air at the threshold, leaving,
looking up and taking air,
door to my back, doors all around.

[rosez]

Thank you Marc
Liked the beauty of crisp air flowing in from the picture of a cage open from above. ~rosez~

[Tom 10]

Walls form buildings
buildings form walls
welcome to Chicago

[rosez]

Fading of Love
  
   Complimenting each other
Their love like stars up in the sky
  Untill clouds darken them away

~rosez~

[CorneliusPoe]

Bested in thought by a stranger, I asked him to share.

[bri h]

Word here,
phrase there.
Everything put
Together
Leads us all to
Poems.

[rosez]

A Waiting~

              Waiting for you

Mind, to shut down, eyes half open

       Till you are mine, Victory


~rosez~

[CorneliusPoe]

Dreams die at dawn,
sentenced in half-light,
burned by the sun.

[rosez]

Good one Marc, so you don't day-dream?(on a lighter note)