@drab Thanks for engaging in the discussion.
Is he a sex offender? An addict, a git that uses rohypnol . . . damn there must be a big bunch of non-convicted bastards out there we ought to label as sex offenders.
Regardless, it appears having has his 'manhood/libido' taken from him he no longer has to prove himself in the manner he did before and with that freedom has ironically gained more power over women because of his selflessness. Why would the women discover what he used to be unless he confessed to them?
@shadowdrifter -- good ideas for S1, but I'd need to take a close look to see if they interfere with the rhythm should I adopt the changes.
Not spilling seed can be a voluntary decision on the part of non-chemically castrated men . . . not often, but possible . . . so I think I need the mention of penetration also.
Although the last few lines are *tell* I think they are what activates the insult/outrage/questions asked by the reader, so I'm not sure if they should go.
Thanks for reading folks, and your comments.
