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He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« on: January 04, 2014, 02:43:00 PM »
He Won’t Reverse the Decision

Court-ordered rather than elected,
his impotence, once he accepted it,
gave him more power than when
he regularly wenched and laid
one night stands in his bachelor pad
an addict, a monster who used rohypnol
which kept the act consensual
or difficult to prove otherwise.

Enforced celibacy flipped the focus
on to her pleasure – he had not lost
his sense of touch,
nor his desire to please
and the sacrifice of  not spilling seed
seemed little price to pay
for heightened awareness, caresses,
kisses, visual and aural feasts,
tongue licks and fingertip treats
freely given when phallic penetration
was taken off the agenda.

His bedpost boasts more notches
for satisfied partners, now
he puts their orgasm first
and climaxes intellectually,
with far less mess and no need
for tissues or bathroom privacy
for moments of masturbation.
Chemical castration saved him
from selfishness and though
his libido lowered, his sensitivity increased
making this man a lover, not a beast.

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2014, 02:54:21 PM »
Really?

I can't believe I'm reading this just as I am getting ready to leave the house--I have so many questions.

Sio, is it possible you are living in a dream world?

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #2 on: January 04, 2014, 02:58:24 PM »
Aha! So you think men are so selfish they couldn't appreciate their other senses just for the sake of them . . . or are all our senses related to our libidos? How then do we appreciate art? Food? Music? Does the response have to stir a climax? ;D ::) ;D ::) ;D :o

Does male power only exist in a spurt of semen and a stiff cock? ::) Will they only give if they can get?

Glad you thought it raised some questions, Linda. ;D ;D ;D ;D >:D

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #3 on: January 04, 2014, 02:59:14 PM »
Unusual subject matter, I googled and got up to speed.  Sounds like punishment /(putative) rehabilitation for the subject.  The poem is a pretty complete description of the result.  Perhaps not exactly what its proponents envisioned.  There are some nice turns of phrase, but to my ear, a little heavy on the telling-type description.
Still, nice writing.
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T

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #4 on: January 04, 2014, 03:07:58 PM »
Thanks, Tom you're correct, it is supposed to be punishment . . . yet, freed of his urges and relinquishing his sexual desires this apparently 'impotent' man turns out to be more (sexually) powerful than when he was poking around all over the place [a sign of true potency in some cultures] ::) :o

Not sure if the tell removal would adequately convey the intention of the poem. Just wanted to rattle a cage. :D

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2014, 03:11:08 PM »
I think you're doing that and its a controversial thesis you suggest.  Intriguing and personal.
 :)
T

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #6 on: January 04, 2014, 03:11:34 PM »
Would a person willing to use rohypnol to get what he wants suddenly turn into a caring, sensitive person just because one aspect of his physicality has been put out of action? Is there some evidence this really happens? I don't mean to indict men I mean there is probably some pathological selfishness underlying the ability to use those means and both men and women are capable of such selfishness---played out differently perhaps by the two genders but .....perhaps I'm wrong.

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #7 on: January 04, 2014, 03:13:17 PM »
 ;D Maybe he learned the hard way [no pun intended] ::)

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #8 on: January 04, 2014, 03:15:53 PM »
Quote
no pun intended

Yeah--right

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #9 on: January 04, 2014, 03:17:27 PM »
 ;D ;D ;D

Certainly this is a piece of fiction  -- but hey, why can't horror stories have fairytale endings? ::)

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #10 on: January 04, 2014, 03:21:16 PM »
rohypnol vs. chemical castration---an epic battle with a fairytale ending ;D ;D ;D


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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #11 on: January 04, 2014, 03:31:53 PM »
One more thought before i get going---

I wonder how this would come out if you wrote it from the POV of the predator. Would he undergo a complete change of heart or would he find another way to exert power over a sexual partner using his newfound "sensitivity" to her needs but in a way that is still calculating.

Do I sound as if I'm a bit of a cynic re: human motivations?

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #12 on: January 04, 2014, 03:34:08 PM »
 :D Chemical castration reduces libido, sexual desire, BUT the question inherently posed within the poem is does all desire diminish once sex is out of the equation? Could you not still enjoy the senses outside a sexual context? If not, what happens when you eat, listen to music, look at or touch works of art . . . does it all go? Are we fundamentally driven by our sexual desire for everything from which we draw pleasure? Agreed it is a basic instinct, but what then of the others? Blame Freud.  ;D

Do [voluntarily] celibate individuals have a less satisfying life because they choose not to have sex? ::) Are they missing out on sense stimulation?

I don't think I want to get into the head of the predator -- too much of a mind shift for this female. :D
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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #13 on: January 04, 2014, 03:38:10 PM »
Now you are really raising some big big questions--you could even ask at what point is libido truly lost. I will be watching this discussion from my laptop---interested to hear what others have to say. Really Sio this is a much bigger issue than i first realised---nice.

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Re: He Won’t Reverse the Decision
« Reply #14 on: January 04, 2014, 03:43:58 PM »
Heh, heh, heh >:D >:D >:D  ;D