Author Topic: bendy  (Read 1268 times)

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bendy
« on: May 09, 2014, 04:43:33 PM »
bendy

fingers dislocate
countless times
a day

shoulders sublux
only twice
or thrice

doorframes pop up
out of nowhere
to bar my way

tables, chairs and
chests of drawers
throw themselves
at me

I trip up the stairs
and lose my balance
standing still

black bruises
dot my skin
and veins may
pop at random

but I can easily
scratch my own back
and nibble my toes

« Last Edit: May 10, 2014, 09:52:20 AM by Nelodra »

Offline Mark T

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Re: bendy
« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2014, 07:40:38 PM »

Me again. This is well-written and very clear - but the narrative is dismaying.

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Re: bendy
« Reply #2 on: May 10, 2014, 05:42:25 AM »
Thank you Mark. I never thought of it like that. The dismaying part. I used to think this was all very normal, and was quite shocked to find out things didn't work that way for most others. I still have a hard time wrapping my head around that.

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Re: bendy
« Reply #3 on: May 10, 2014, 12:52:45 PM »
Lookie what I got in the mail today. Three of those really handy wallet cards for my girls and myself. I hope we'll never actually need them.  :)

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Re: bendy
« Reply #4 on: May 10, 2014, 01:51:31 PM »
I hope you never need them too.

That bit about stitches cutting through the connective tissue really brought it home to me.
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Re: bendy
« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2014, 02:44:06 PM »
My younger daughter had stitches once. It was unbelievable. They just tore through the skin and she ended up with a far bigger scar than she'd have had without the stitches.  :(