Author Topic: Family - some violence/mild swear/some sexual content - 1030words  (Read 2712 times)

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Re: Family - some violence/mild swear/some sexual content - 1030words
« Reply #1 on: November 08, 2013, 11:57:14 AM »
I remember this, still love it. ;D

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Re: Family - some violence/mild swear/some sexual content - 1030words
« Reply #2 on: November 08, 2013, 12:33:13 PM »
Thank you, Sio :)

I trimmed it down. It is easier after a bit of time. So I'm unsure if the picture's clearer for it, or maybe I went too far. I didn't want to point to who they are/were, but maybe give an assumption.

Thanks again

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Re: Family - some violence/mild swear/some sexual content - 1030words
« Reply #3 on: November 08, 2013, 08:15:13 PM »
I can't believe I read this whole thing. You are one sick puppy. sicksicksick

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Re: Family - some violence/mild swear/some sexual content - 1030words
« Reply #4 on: November 09, 2013, 07:57:12 AM »
Thank you for reading and your thoughts, 2par :)

I used to write horror, well a lot darker than this. Here I wanted to show how love can capture.

Appreciate your time.

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Re: Family - some violence/mild swear/some sexual content - 1030words
« Reply #5 on: November 09, 2013, 10:08:48 AM »
My time is yours, no matter what you write. yech. But, I hate to admit it, it was fun.