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Offline wayne g

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« on: October 07, 2013, 01:35:10 PM »
Hi,
     I am looking for people to read through and critique the first two episodes of a sit-com I am working on. I am looking for feedback more on the story, characters and general humour as opposed to the technical aspect which I know needs working on. I would be happy to return the favour.

Apologies if I have posted this in the wrong place.

Thanks

Wayne

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Re: Appeal
« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2013, 01:36:54 PM »
Hi Wayne,

You would be best asking in the scriptwriting section. Hang on I will post you a link.
Time to take it serious and get the job done

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« Reply #2 on: October 07, 2013, 01:37:30 PM »
http://mywriterscircle.com/index.php?board=11.0

Please remember always nice to give back too  ;)
Time to take it serious and get the job done

Offline wayne g

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Re: Appeal
« Reply #3 on: October 07, 2013, 01:53:25 PM »
Thanks Dawn I will post it there.

Wayne