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Offline Plumjive

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #15 on: September 28, 2013, 09:21:53 PM »
K, how do i edit this?

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #16 on: September 28, 2013, 09:26:07 PM »
Truly cannot figure out how to edit the original post.  I agree with 510, one word could make all the difference.  Help?  :P

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #17 on: September 28, 2013, 09:26:45 PM »
Don't let the opinion of one person discourage you from writing anything! I'd like to see you post that poem again on the poetry boards and see you work on that as well as your GOOD story here. There's tons of helpful people here who'll support and encourage you. You're a writer. Get used to it.  ;D Bri.

Sorry plum. You can't edit till you reach 50 posts. It's a new rule. Go to the fast-thread pages and get busy havin fun. On a good day/night you can generate 50 posts in an hour or so. Bri
« Last Edit: September 28, 2013, 09:28:34 PM by brianh »
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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #18 on: September 28, 2013, 09:31:05 PM »
Btw. I got that it was an Indian Sweat Lodge straight away, by your writing. Mebbee I'm more in touch with my 'tribal' side than 510 is? heh heh
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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #19 on: September 28, 2013, 09:33:44 PM »
Bri, how do I change this original post..I work as a W@H RST/WNS agent providing remote based networking assistance ...and I cannot find how to edit this original post.  I think I could include the word sweat in the first sentence and make things better for folks who have never sweat or aren't familiar with sweats.  Tyvm.

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #20 on: September 28, 2013, 09:35:01 PM »
There you go -- sweat lodge solves the problem. ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)

@ Bri' -- I did explain my thought process as to why I had difficulty -- I wasn't being a twerp.

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #21 on: September 28, 2013, 09:35:56 PM »
read up two or three of my posts. I've explained to you why you can't. But I think you can ask a mod to edit it for you. B
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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #22 on: September 28, 2013, 09:36:18 PM »
K, re-read your previous post Bri.  Ty man.  Appreciate your help.  Appreciate all of you.

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #23 on: September 28, 2013, 09:38:05 PM »
There you go -- sweat lodge solves the problem. ;) ;) ;) ;) ;)

@ Bri' -- I did explain my thought process as to why I had difficulty -- I wasn't being a twerp.

I never called you a twerp shvon. I may have implied it, but I never said it. Jokin aside, I wouldn't. Plum meet the person who taught me how to write properly. Her name is 510bhan, shvon to her friends. Shvon meet plum. B
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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #24 on: September 28, 2013, 09:38:34 PM »
Hell, i didn't know about sweats until I was imprisoned lol.  Oregon tribes fought for and received rights to practice spiritual things while incarcerated..  Had a cousin inside who was like 'Bro..you're sweating and hanging with us'.  Which was awkward and difficult as my father is white...but w/e.  My point I 'spose is that even a 1/2 blood like me didin't know about sweats till I met one :P

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #25 on: September 28, 2013, 09:39:06 PM »
Hi 510, nice to meetcha.

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #26 on: September 28, 2013, 09:39:14 PM »
Have a hop around in Games and Challenges -- even just leave a smiley face . . . it still counts as a post. Or chat in the MWC bar. Once you hit 50 you can adjust your profile, get a pic up, modify posts -- wow . . . it's just amazing! :D

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #27 on: September 28, 2013, 09:40:37 PM »
I never called you a twerp shvon. I may have implied it, but I never said it. Jokin aside, I wouldn't. Plum meet the person who taught me how to write properly. Her name is 510bhan, shvon to her friends. Shvon meet plum. B

Yeah, I know . . . but sometimes I can be twerpy and cheeky to folk I know -- like you. ;) ;D

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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #28 on: September 28, 2013, 09:41:26 PM »
1/2 blood sounds much better than half caste which is how I describe myself. I might adopt that term if you don't mind plum. 'Didin't' = didn't. B
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Re: Little story - 1000 words. 1008?
« Reply #29 on: September 28, 2013, 09:44:52 PM »
Yeah, I know . . . but sometimes I can be twerpy and cheeky to folk I know -- like you. ;) ;D

Yeah I know. I bring out the mother monster in you. heh heh.

I was tellin plum before I'd like to read the poem that he/she wrote. Btw, are you a guy or a gal plum? I can't tell from your name. B
Fare thee well Skip. We're all 'Keening' now. xbx